The Bedroom Sessions - Comments

"So what have you got down the side of your bed?" I enquired, and Oli shot me a withering look as he scrambled off of the counter, pulling his jeans up by the belt loops on his good hand.

Bahahahaha. :D

erm. I can't wait for the rest of this. I wish you had more readers, really you deserve it.

Aw.

This deserves loads more comments.

Its heaps cute and its written really differently.

I like is a whole lot, Oliver is really different in this! I like it!

"Excuse me sweetheart but Oliver says you're in his English class... would you like a lift anywhere?"

Haha, wow. That would literally mortify me. That is so classic. And the last part about Oliver falling down the stairs and not bruising or breaking anything besides his ego. That was incredible. I love this story.

I'm excited for what's coming up next, I have a feeling that it's going to be greatt.

aww...
i really like this stori
i feel bad for florrie...
please write more soon!
amy J

Geez. D: Poor Florrie.

I randomly clicked on stories and found this. I'm only on the first chapter and I already know that I'm subscribing. You're right in the A/N about how all teenage representations of Oliver really make no sense.

I see him drawing on his arms in felt tip dejectedly, his black eye twenty minutes fresh. That line made me sad for Oliver. D:

Hahah, of course Oliver would throw a paper airplane at the teacher. Jesus, what's with the glares? I can totally see him just taking her pen without asking and drawing all over his hands. You're character development is flippin' amazing!

Hahaha. The first paragraph of Chapter Four literally had me laughing so everyone in my living room could hear me. :D

And I love your description of Matt in Chapter Five, I think it is. :D I also really liked how at the end, Oliver was still sending glares towards Florrie, but making sure that Tom was taken care of.

Hahaha. The first 73 prime numbers.. :D Hah.

Matt cracks me up. :D

Sighing, I tried to edge past his seat, but instead of tucking it in so I walk behind him, he tucked it out belligerently so I had to navigate my way past his knees. He could never resist a chance, could he? Had to read that a couple times, but once I understood it, it made me laugh ;D

"Get off!" Oli whispered harshly, trying to push me onto the carpet, his face as red as mine. HAHAHAHAHAAH. :D

That whole scene had the stupidest grin spread across my face. I could totally see in my mind Oli getting all freaking pissed off and ignoring her 'cause she fell into his lap because he wouldn't get the hell out of her way.

I could see Oli, staring at his lasagna like it had been rude to him, but there was no way I was going to sit next to him :D Funnyy

Wow. I really like this. You just earned yourself a new subscriber and commenter. :D

Poor Oliver. =/
But I know that whole popular table is going to do something. That's my impression, anyway.

Great update, doll! :D

I love this

Haha, I can't imagine how embarrassing that must have been for both of them.
I loved the last line especially. ^-^

Keep it up! :D

haha yes mattie is quite adorable(his accent is funny) but i love lee malia a smidge more....well alot more ;)
loved it. update?

Matt is adorable!
And I'm happy she's friends with Tom.
Oliver needs to chill the fuck out and give her a chance.
And her mom needs to lay off her, it's getting rediculous!
Ha… please update soon! <33333

Haha, Mattie is adorable. :D
And I'll say it once more, her mom is a total creeper.

Keep updating! :D

This is absolutely amazing. Glad to find a story that is more realistic to how Oli really was in prep school. Haha Mattie the bully. Hmm Oli seems like a huge jerk to her. And dood!, her mom is mean. Anyways, update soon please. :)

Haha, I bet Oliver isn't very good at maths.
But I did like the no dialogue in the chapter. Made it more insightful into her mind. =]

Keep updating, this story is so cheesin'. :D

I think this is one of the best Oli stories I’ve ever read, no joke.

It’s very well written. And I really like that you don’t need to have a lot of dialog to keep it interesting and worth reading.

If I could give out those stupid points, I’d give you as many as I could for this ^-^

more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!! lol its so good!!!

Tom is a sweetheart. I think it's kind of funny that Matt carried her. xD

Anyway, I'm so sad that this story has barely any comments! People need to get on the ball! >:O

Great update. ^-^ Please do it again.

Finally, a story about Oliver that’s set in high school, and realistic. This is one of the most original stories I’ve read on this site to date; and proves that the best stories get the lest attention.

Hehe, Oli. xD
Great update, please get another out soon! :D

Updates please?